AND THEN...

questionable ending; take your pick

AND THEN...

Rich blue flames fly near and far

whoosh

red balloon soars

into the unknown aquamarine

ascends among misty clouds

glides smoothly

a few bumps in the unpolished air

champagne bottles burst, spray

bubbles laughter, thrills

 

Journeys in time

notable moments, without a care

trees, fields of Rape

diminish to the naked eye

tranquil then jolts during tempests

balloon descends over treetops

passengers shriek with cheers or fears

and then…

 

 

Author's Note

I experienced part of this journey....
Stay tuned for the next episode of "AT BRIDGES END", poetic prose

Reviews

[Neville]

and then ................................................. long pause .. there was a jolt that came out of the blue 💙

[Chris Shaw]

I very much like watching them in flight Betty. Not so sure I would want to be up there though. Haven’t got much of a head for heights. Must be wonderful looking down on the ground though, if you are brave enough to dare. A wonderful read. Thank you so much.

Betty

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome dear Chris...my balloon ride was thrilling and we landed safely!
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

Love your new avatar Betty. A charming you.

[AYVID N]

One must be so brave to go up in a balloon, in the unknown sky. A euphoric ascent to great heights, the fields and the expanses below, a timeless scape in the mind. But how the heart would lurch with the unruly gusts of wind, a steep descent. I could sense the thrill and excitement and also the suspense in your words. A poem, an adventure I enjoyed, absolutely.

[Betty Hermelee]

Dearest Divya
I so appreciate you comments on this poem...yes there is thrill and perhaps fear as well!!!
Glad you're back!!!
Best to you
B

[AYVID N]

I'm so happy to be back. Thank you so much. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. ⚘❤

[Akinlolu]

Wonderful journey. Left me wistful though. I wish I knew how this one ended. But it guess the fun compensates for the risk of taking such a journey

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for visiting me ad a lovely review of my poem!
Best
Betty

[Akinlolu]

You're welcome

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I hope you enjoyed!!! The ride
I hate heights
But can imagine it being wonderful
Great write !! Enjoyed

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Julie, it's kind of scary but thrilling too!
Best, B

[Dave Brown]

If this is a journey in time, (away from 'The Bridge??) better make a list and check it twice!
Very few, if any, 'facilities' way up there
Have a super flight BESTB

[Betty Hermelee]

yes, far away my friend...perhaps in France!
What facilities? Thank you muchly
BESTB

[Lisasview]

Wow... rather exciting I would say!!!
Thrilling ride,
Really enjoyed it...
Lisa

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks so much Lisa, a bit suspenseful as well.
Much appreciated...
Best, B

[Ladysue]

I like the title and as an ending to this wonderful poem. It sparks imagination. I always wanted to ‘soar into the unknown aquamarine’ what a perfect and beautiful line that is. A journey in time indeed with all its peaks and valleys. I wish I did this when I was in the Loire Vally in France. Your poem took me there. What a wonderful experience to have. Exciting. A beautifully written poem my friend.

[Betty Hermelee]

What a thoughtful and sparkling review L.S., really appreciate you.
Best, B

[Ladysue]

My pleasure Betty.. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I felt the suspense of the journey, the rise of fear, the excitement across, the result to come.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Sami, yes I wanted the reader to feel a bit of suspense, you nailed it!!! much appreciated!
Best, B

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! You are welcome 😊

[Soren]

An exciting adventure painted well in words. Beautiful.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much for a fine review.
Best, B