THE LETTERBOX

THE LETTERBOX

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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LETTER BOX

 

Weeks of long yawns, groans, sobs

No posts across a vast sea

My skin clammy, chilled

Hair oily, unkempt

No purpose to freshen up

Alone and tense for news

The letter box befits an empty soul

Lost in a vacuous abyss

I am akin with such colorless matters

 

I should seek a vocation

Anything to boost my doldrums

Doubtless I take up knitting

Imagine an amethyst blue sweater

To tally with his transparent blue eyes

Oh, if only I could gaze into those expressive peepers

At this notable moment, but only in dreams

 

Each day I hasten to the letter box with disquiet

Gingerly open only to find naught from abroad

Goblets of salty tears dribble down my cheeks

I gaze into the mirror, repelled by my aspect

 

Is he alive?

Of course

Perchance he is off the beaten path

Where there is no letterbox

I ought to whimper myself to sleep

To pass over my low spirits

As my posts to him need not be

Miserable, only strong yet tender

 

 

 

 

 

© 2023 Betty Hermelee


Author's Note

Betty Hermelee
Thank you for reading! A poem in the series from The Bridges End

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It shows how much you are waiting for the letters, wasnt the same other side too? Very deep emotions you have expressed very nicely. Thank you for sharing the poem.
Hi Betty, I have created a facebook page, writers wall, please do visit. Its a collection of poems.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thank you for a nice review, and yes I'll take a peek!
Best, B.
JessyJacob

2 Years Ago

I really appreciate your visit.
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
Best, B
I imagine someone close to the speaker being at War...either a husband or son---
in quite a lesser degree, I am reminded of my long-distance relationship with a woman from Poland.
The letters took a long time to arrive...but they were worth it.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thank you J. for a thoughtful review; this is total fiction, but somehow I got into it!
Best,.. read more
You know, this poem really speaks to me. Not so much about a letter box but the anticipation of recieving word from someone you care about. I cannot tell you how many times I have logged on just hoping and praying to hear something, anything. Hope you hear what you are longing for. I didn't. You always write something that touches me. Thank you for posting what you do.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

AW, that's such a nice thing to say Will, I appreciate you and your beautiful poems!
Best, B
You certainly captured the sense of yearning and concern felt.

Winston

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thanks for a lovely review W.
Best, B

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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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