THE SECOND GOODBYE

off to serve

The Second Goodbye

I scarcely slept last eve

my eyes blinked in his shadow

he slumbers free of sound

in his stillness I tenderly massage his toes with mine

nought a stir

his leave confines me this night at seven o’clock

I count the hours, long drawn out for my heart to bare

 

 

As the dark pink violet sun swells over the horizon

I am keen to awaken him to enfold in my arms

I pause and behold his face

eyes sealed, a fragile smile on his faultless lips

he rouses faintly, one eye tussles to open

alas he amorously regards me

And says “don’t move”

I wonder what he opines

perhaps a last long gaze to preserve

my face in his mind’s eye

 

We are placid for moments

till he draws my face at hand

he whispers “Good morning dearest”

I smile, all the while to disguise my worry

neither of us fancy the notion to flee the silken sheets

yet we release sluggishly

 

We settle on a cheerful day

to overlook our doom this eve

we elect a picnic miles away

upon a hillside chocked with clover

I bundle a basket of provisions

we stroll in unison

he avails me up the hill

I set up the blanket

the remain is a dreamy afternoon

 

‘Tis six o’clock forthwith I count the minutes

my soul suppresses, he is aware

we engross for what seems like hours

a brief twinkle

and he retreats

the second goodbye

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading!

Reviews

[Marie]

A very beautiful, warm, tender, romantic write, dear Betty. Togetherness is eloquently inked throughout the poem. It is like two beautiful hearts are so emotionally embroidered together, that if one stopped breathing, the other one would also stop breathing. There is a "holding point" as if the two do not want to part but to remain locked in the very beautiful evening they are enjoying together. Poignant, in that they have to physically separate, but each keeps the other's love safely and securely in their heart. An amazing write, dear Betty and one I enjoyed reading very much, though saddened at the parting. A beautiful love is reflected throughout the poem in each word, in each line, making the poem an unforgettable write. A privilege to read. Thank you for sharing, Betty...

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Marie
Dear Marie:
An awesome review of this poem, which now, bye the way, is now bart of a published book of fiction called
AT BRIDGES END….you can purchase at any online bookseller such as Amazon, Kindle, Barnes and Noble, etc….what you read is the beginning of an epic journey as told by the protagonist……🌷🌷
warmly, B

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Betty and thank you for kindly telling me about your book. I have noted the title. Thank you again, Betty...

[Sami Khalil]

Serving his beloved with intense romance before he leaves for duty. I wonder if duty to wife comes first or country?
Beautiful lines to appreciate. You write splendidly

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Sam for a lovely review!
Best, B

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Miss B.

[Betty Hermelee]

dear Sami: i want to let you know that is poetic prose is now a novel of fiction called AT BRIDGES END, online at all booksellers….. i think you will love it!🌷

[emmajoygreen]

This is the true literary elegance of moments romantic. Nothing tawdry or unsubtle'; tis the pleasure of warm togetherness coming and going, leaving memories - and the unspoken promise of more to come. I love the way you write poems like this: emotional and traditional yet giving the sense of utter liberty, Betty! '.. we stroll in unison ..'

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you thank you....tis a distinct pleasure to write like you!!! Take care
Best, B

[emmajoygreen]

Think by now you know how much I admire your writing! Wishing you all you wish yourself and those you love, Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

You're too kind Emma!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I hope it's not last because these words ring inside to scream hello

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Mauricio for your words!!!
Best, B

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

There is such tenderness within this poem. The love, the longing, the holding on and letting go are all so sweet. Very well penned.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much for a lovely review!
Best, B

[Lorry]

It is never easy to say goodbye. But understanding we have to make the most of our moments together is the sanest thing we can do, in a less than sane world.
Whether in peace or at war, being apart from those loved can feel so unfair, through something so mundane yet necessary as career paths.
Beautifully captured.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much Lorry... your reviews are excellent!
Best, B

[willweb]

Even with a special day planned the goodbye coming at the end of the day looms large. Thankfully though there are people who do serve the countries they come from for without them, none of the rest of us would know peace. A beautiful tale of love and the heartbreak and worry that comes from one we love leaving for whatever duty they are to perform. Beautiful Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Will for your so perfect reviews and support!
much appreciated!
Best, B