MOODS OF HER DOMAIN

THE EXQUISITE AZORES

MOODS OF HER DOMAIN

 

For eternity

she was born to own

and cherish these islands

where deep coves scrub

the rocky shore

swathes of lava hug the seaboard

ancient volcanoes dapple the land

 

Her moods oscillate from enraged

and wrathful waves

as she batters the cliffs

like the might of a lioness

who sprints to seize her prey

yet, at sunset her tone whirls to placid ripples

as the moon peers from above

and controls her temper

 

Wind is her staff of life

and in the frigid whips through the fragile green

To twist and turn them relentlessly

for these islands are but specks

in a gargantuan sea

 

Misty skies undulate near to fabricate

opaque fog which hovers over the steep highlands

and green meadows dotted with cows

 

Nonetheless with all her strength

the gentle peoples adulate her

for she renders that for which

they cannot live without

millions of edible sea creatures

which sustain their existence

 

 

                                    

 

Author's Note

So Happy to be back at the CAFE after an incredible vacation!!!
Hope you enjoy this poem! It only touches on the magnificence of the Islands and the sea

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Betty,

The Sea most certainly is Mother to us all, as you have so wonderfully expressed!

Marve

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much Marv, appreciated!
Warmly, B

[Ken Simm.]

Interesting paen to nature and very visual in its structure. The coast looks a lot like my Scottish coast about a mile from where I live.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you kindly Ken, much appreciated.
Best, B

[Bliss in Sorrow]

This was very magnificent and imaginative Betty. I felt like I was on a trip in the lap of nature. You really made me feel like packing my bags and going on a trip soon. I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing :)

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks for your joyful review!!!
Best, B

[Scott Kris]

Personification of nature is a powerful way to discover a voice for our humanity. Nature speaks openly the secrets we struggle to discover within ourselves. You mixed and melted different creatures and elements of nature as well to speak your heart.
The last two lines felt like something redundant and better left to understanding. Just my gut reaction. The whole poem was dreamy. You spoke with keen observations as well. Then the last two lives just felt dull in comparison. Does this make sense?

Thank you for sharing your work. I enjoyed the read.

[Betty Hermelee]

Everything makes sense….thank you so much for reviewing….
Best, Betty

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is wonderful dear Betty. You took me everywhere with you and I enjoyed the places.
"Wind is her staff of life
and in the frigid whips through the fragile green
To twist and turn them relentlessly
for these islands are but specks"
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
in a gargantuan sea

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much for your review, much appreciated!
Best, B.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Betty.

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful and imaginative description Betty. You took me there. The moods of the sea can really fluctuate as you have penned here. If this is where you went on holiday, then lucky you. A fabulous write dear poet.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Dearest Christi apologize for getting back to you so late! I loved your review and yes the trip was divine!
Best to you dear poet
B.

[Ladysue]

I was drawn into the magnificent feel of this poem. The passion, excitement, strength and ease all came through with your exquisite imagery. Excellently and beautifully written. Sounds like a trip that sparks wonder..sounds invigorating..enjoyed this..

[Betty Hermelee]

What a beautiful review, much appreciated!
Best, B

[Miss Sharon]

So beautifully descriptive I felt as though I were there with you! Bravo my friend. ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks so much dear Sharon, much appreciated!
Best, B

[Gee]

I love Portugal, have been many times often holidaying on the silver coast which at times has the wild seas you describe. Welcome home Betty, good to read your words:))

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Gee; we were in the Azores and Portugal, loved both, wish I were closer, as you are. Much appreciated, glad to be back at the Cafe!
Best, B