Hey Betty , this is very emotional poem and I loved how beautifully you have penned down your emotions here. Hope the sadness vanishes and you are in a happy space soon. I enjoyed reading it.
Best wishes, Palak 😊
A Kiss, a sigh a sweet goodbye
and a romantic affair must come
to an end ..a poignant poem so
well written in fine descriptives
after the elation of one new love
only to return to dullness of a
twenty year marriage .
Partings can be hell, and I felt this here Betty. An affair which gave so much, must end. What a wrench to return to the mundane after the height of romantic excitement. Poignant when all that is left are memories.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thank you dear Chris, for a lovely review!
Best, B
This poem is emotional and hits all the right spots. You can feel the longing and reminiscing, the need and yearn for embrace and attention. Your words are clear but beautiful with brilliant metaphors and every stanza is as great as the last. The ending of such an intense and long romantic is always heartbreaking in very, very sad way that’s hard to explain. A way some people don’t understand how gut wrenching it is. Thank you so much for sharing.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Such an amazing review, I love it! yes, romance isn't always easy.....Best to you,
B.
dearest Betty... It is in our Nature to seek Shelter... when days are lonely and we seem to wither like an Old Book on a Shelf. You have expressed the Cooing of Doves when Life needs the Warmth of an Embrace. Be blessed... tenderly, Pat
Sensuous and sad, this one. The speaker describes with moving imagery the end of an affair that became a full blown romance. She has come to term with the fact that it cannot go on and she must return to her unsatisfactory marriage. She must be satisfied with memories, but apparently that is better than the negatives that would attend continuation. Can't have everything, I guess.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thanks you for your thoughtful review John.
Best, B
I the complete poem dear Betty.
"How can I forget those wanted episodes of impulsive envy?
Nights at rest, as we notice falling stars, the slight din
Of the oak leaves swaying
A random bird song
Our eyelashes flutter as the breeze kicks up"
The above lines. I loved. When we stay with someone for many years. The eyes of love become different. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
A very thoughtful review John, much appreciated.
Best, B.
2 Years Ago
Always my pleasure and you are welcome dear Betty.
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..