THE MIDDLE

THE MIDDLE

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
"

being in the middle....

"

 

I am in the middle

of a Prussian blue sea

I am in the midst of

my climb up an oak tree

 

I am in the middle of a book

whose name might put me to shame

I am midway between

my first and last name

 

I am centered between

the sun and the sand

my skin is burned

I wear a Cadmium red headband

 

I am midmost within

the moon and my shadow

similar to a ghost

I choose to follow

 

I am halfway in thick, tall grass

no one spies on me

naught to report to

that affords me the key to be free

 

I am a middle child

naught attention do I earn

my wish is that my siblings are on some planets

thankfully that kills my nagging heartburn

 

 

 

 


© 2022 Betty Hermelee


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Betty Hermelee
dedicated to all middle kids!

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As a middle child I adore this piece of poetry. Thank you, B. For always sharing your art with us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Carlos, well. I guess you can understand my dilemma, but now that I'm an "ancient" I .. read more
Aw this is so sweet! It's depicted in the movies and novels that middle kids do not receive enough attention from their parents and often are forgotten. I have no idea if this is true, but your poem was so nicely crafted!My favourite line is " I am centered between the sun and the sand" Makes me think of nice crystal water, it's the only thing I could think of that was in the middle of the sun and sand... but let me tell you, no one's forgets that crystal water :) Thanks for sharing!



Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thank you Aura for you thoughtful review.
Best, B
Aura

2 Years Ago

The pleasure is all mine :)

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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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