MAGNETIC TRANCE

MAGNETIC TRANCE

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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how to de-stress

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Magnetic Trance

stress is red, blood chaos, thick clusters
I shall paint my core in yellow washes
to savor warm vibrations
from sun's magnetic trance

© 2022 Betty Hermelee


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Yellow for warmth for the feel good factor, feeling better already. Red for stress. Too fiery for me. I'm all for the sun's magnetic trance Betty.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

I can understand why Chris, but life is not all warmth even though we want it to be; thanks for your.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

All good Betty. Hope the same for you. Take care my friend :)
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You as well,and you're very welcome
Betty, this was simply awesome! I could feel the warm sun as it slowly led me to relaxation!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kathy, much appreciated!
Best
B.
KATHY SUE SILLS

2 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Brilliant writing! Visual vibrations in yellow rippling all the way here to me! Where do you come up with these?!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Don't ask me!!! just pops out of the pea brain...
Thank you my dear P
Hugs, B
Patricia

2 Years Ago

you're welcome and not a pea brain! You are brilliant!
a trance this poem puts me under...stress, chaos,washed away in warm streams
of understanding.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your lovely review J.
Best
B.
My brain cells just coagulated in the color of your chaos!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thanks W., appreciate it!

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Added on April 25, 2022
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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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