BIRD-DROPPINGS

BIRD-DROPPINGS

 

Thunder of motorcycles

Agitates the harmony of my pondering

Visions of early spring

On a transparent, windy day

Naked trees, limbs rock n roll

In the reflection of a radiant sun

From far off, I discern minuscule

Pink buds on a pendulous bough

 

I set out to savor this splendid day

Uncover a consummate site

Wherein I shall park my worn Scottish plaid blanket

Hitherto I plant my picnic basket crammed with

Luscious eatables

Thereafter, I lay under a bald tree, nigh to behold

The comeliness of it

 

A glance upward reveals two large nests

I study their shape and size

Along with the query of whether or not

The birds are mating

Or perchance the nest is hollow

 

In the wake of a relieving repose

I choose to consume some food

My basket is abundant

With red apples, carrots, an egg sandwich

Some homemade cookies

And a flagon of black tea

 

Whilst I nibble my lunch

I set off a loud giggle

It appears the nest over-head is nay bare

I sense a bird-dropping on my head

Next, some subtle chirps

I utter a loud chirp in return

Why, you little creatures still survive

A welcome song

In the hush of my pondering

 

Reviews

[Dave Brown]

with this splattered blemish on an otherwise lovely moment in time I believe it is well past time that our feathered friends exhibit an awareness of when and where to drop their do-do
Poll; should birds continue to stop and drop anytime or place.....
should birds be required to wear proper gaunchies............
should picnics beneath nests be banned..........................
Vote...........................................................................

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks much Dave, you stop those birds!
Best
B.

[Patricia Wedel]

In the twinkling of an eye… I do spy a Nest of turquoise eggs bursting with Pride … little wings will rest until the moment they are strong enough to fly.. perchance to dream… ah there’s the Rub… tenderly, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks so much dear Pat, birds do make people smile!
Truly
B

[Lisasview]

Pondering is a good thing!! Delightful to eves drop into your special time dear Betty.. Gosh bird droppings..
I would love to be there with you to share your lovely lunch..especiall homemade cookies..and sit there with you..even with the bird over head!!
Lisa, Late Sunday in Spain

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much Lisa!! I'm jealous, where are you in Spain?
Best, B

[Lisasview]

We moved from the states about 1 1/2 years a go to Costa Blanca North.. We live in Benitachell, about 4 minutes by car to the sea.
You are most welcome

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks I’ll have to look it up!😊

[knighngale]

Love that Betty. I love the whole process from motorcycle, to the nest, to pcinicking and lastly to a bird drop. :D (It reminds me of my little woods, I have lots of fun. I end up in a picnic, and naked. Having fun! It is solate, solace. And I love my little nest. Great read, hon! :D

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for your review, appreciated
Best
Betty

[knighngale]

of course honey, of course Betty :D

[William Michael Reeves]

When I hit Home bird droppings was the first thing I saw. How can I resist a read on that subject. Especially since I got it once right on the head when I stood on a corner downtown. It was interesting how the title added some suspense knowing what was coming but not how or when. I liked the joy of life replacing your irritation. Did you tweet this as well?

I watched a film the other night. It was like watching all of our poetry come to life. It was amazing! The Fountain with Hugh Jackman and Ellen Burstyn. Your black dagger was in it and almost every poetic subject we've all written. It was uncanny. And beautiful. If you watch movies much check it out.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks for a great review W. And for that comment on the film.
Best,B

[KAREN]

This has great imagery, Betty! And I tell you I loved pondering right along with you!

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Karen, much appreciated!
Best, Betty

[KAREN]

My pleasure! It was a Joy to read!

[cheyenne s garcia]

What a treat this was to the eyes to read. I especially fancy the whole aspect of your writing style. keep up the good work my friend. with love - c.g.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Cheyenne for a lovely review!
Best
B.

[Patricia]

it's suppose to be good luck :) this is wonderful, love the flow, the story in it, great words in here. well done B! not warm enough here for a picnic yet but so glad you can. Hugs! Love P

[Betty Hermelee]

YAY! Thank so much P. Love your review!!!
Hugs, B

[Patricia]

Oh you read it! Yay! I’m so happy you like it, I so didn’t want to disappoint you! You deserve it! Well done my friend! Hugs ;) P

[Betty Hermelee]

What can I say? Hugs!😊

[Fran Marie]

I have to admit the title of this one
drew me in; bird droppings, what !
bird poo on the head ..this was a
real down to earth read ..so enjoyable
as you paint the scene with humor
or is that humour..nice work Betty

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Fran for lovely review; I appreciate your humor😊
Best
B.

[Miss Sharon]

What a beautiful scene you've described! I felt as though I were right there with you. I simply LOVE this one Betty! ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks so much Sharon; I do appreciate your reviews😊