TEXTURES OF SPRING

springtime awakening

Textures of Spring

Radiant yellow hues

dark green stalks

trumpet a new awakening

of painted colors and textures

my canvas is soaked

a kaleidoscope of my mood

Daffodils burst

on my masterpiece of springtime

songbirds tell me this

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

A lovely bouquet of delightful
textures come alive in this
colorful collage of art and poetry
an upbeat write ..i so enjoyed

Nice Work

[Betty Hermelee]

You're so welcome Fran!!
Best to you
PS putting up a new one today!

[Fran Marie]

you're s o welcome
I will find your new post
thanks 💙

[Gee]

Roll on springtime and warmer, longer days. The artist in you shines through in this lovely wee piece Betty.
Hope you are well

[Betty Hermelee]

Sorry for delay Gee, but thank you for your lovely review😊

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

Really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much for reviewing!!!

[Katarzyna Anna Koziorow..]

Interesting poem. I read it with pleasure and interest. The words are rather easy to read, but that doesn't mean the poem is bad! On the contrary, I like it very much. The picture fits the punch line. Have a nice day!

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks for your review; yes my poems are easy to read but with much imagery.

[Chris Shaw]

What a welcome splash of yellow delight Betty. I just love daffodils and how they can lift the spirits after the dark, cold days of winter. Spring is my favourite season and your poem and posted image reminded me that there are things to be thankful for when we are living through tragic and uncertain times. Thank you for some joy Betty. All good wishes.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

I'm glad this brightened you up a bit...
Thank so much for your loyalty!!!
Best, B

[Vertigo Cat1111]

If I had written this, I probably would’ve called it something far more bland, like ‘Colors Of Spring’. But I’m so glad you wrote it and called it ‘Textures Of Spring’. This adds so much more to it, maybe it’s because their really is so much new texture. New growth, new air, new energy and new start. You incorporated that excellently here. It’s so light and airy and joyful, spring in a real way, not a corporate way where it’s filled with rabbits and eggs instead of visuals like this, that really capture the season and Easter. I’ve seen people write spring so boring, when the holidays in it are so beautiful and so much more than they make it seem. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful, colorful piece.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Vertigo for such a thoughtful review, loved it!!!
Best, Betty

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Songbirds told you a fine fab imaginative poem, spring and nature inspired you exquisite here wow! Kudos for this vibrant nature muse.

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks you so much for your kind review
Best, Betty
PS I will read your newest!

[Patricia]

Full of light, color, texture just like a painting, excellent! We are finally moving into the new season that colors our world! Can’t wait to read what’s next B. ;)

[Betty Hermelee]

Always a bright light when things are dark dear P.
Next one is dark, but I think you'll appreciate it.
HUGS to you
B

[Patricia]

I always do B. Hugs :)

[John the Baptist]

If I hadn't seen your name, I would still know this was done by a painter. The imagery is extremely vivid, conjuring up a brilliant picture of spring. This one is what I needed to read in the dead of winter.

[Betty Hermelee]

So glad you enjoyed it J... thanks for a great review!
Best, B

[William Michael Reeves]

Songbirds sing in your kaleidoscope of color.
Spinning words spill in written wonder.
Seasons swirl on your palette of mood
And flowers grow when you are understood.
I like your poem Betty, and that's for sure!

Billigami

[Betty Hermelee]

love your review! Very poetic and charming.
Best, B