ALL OF ME

BREVITY: love looks small, but inside it's BIG!

All of Me

Tiny red box
Tiny red box

my heated core inside
squeezed with passion
and pungent perfume
please taste my flesh
this is all of me

Author's Note

BREVITY

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

The umbilical cord gives us nourishment with passion instilled and then we enter the World with desire for giving Love 💗… gently, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Pat, short but sexy!
Sometimes it works!
Truly
B.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words dear Betty. Made the reader fall into the thought. Thank you, dear friend, for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks for your review John, always appreciated
Best, B.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome, dear Betty.

[Patricia]

Well aren’t you just sexiest writer! And woo! Love the pic! Great word choices here as well, impactful to say the least. Love it

[Betty Hermelee]

Maybe just this poem!!! Thank my dear P. for the compliment and the review!
B.

[M. J. Smith]

No ambiguity here! Wow! What lover could ignore that? Quite a picture, too.

[Betty Hermelee]

I guess! Thank you so much for your review.
Best, B

[M. J. Smith]

My quirky sense of humor gets the better of me sometimes. I hope I caused no offense. None was intended. And if I did, I am sorry. You are most welcome, as regards the thank you. I enjoy reading your poems.

[Betty Hermelee]

No apologies please, I appreciate your input….

[Gee]

Betty my dear, you need to be asking before posting pics of me on your feed :))

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re funny! Thanks for reading Gee

[Chris Shaw]

What a gift. Lovely piece of heartfelt brevity Betty. Who could resist? Certainly has impact. All the best dear poet.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you dear Chris. Always appreciated.
Best, B

[Lorry]

The best things come in the smallest packages, so they say. I was told that by every "petite" lady I know. Just don't pick them up and sing the oompa loompa song to them, the get real "grumpy" at that.😊
I wonder if that restraining order is still in place! 😊
Brevity at its best Betty. None of this messing about. Packs a punch from first bell to... TKO at the end.
He was never getting up after that 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks so much dear Lorry...your humor is stunning!!
Best, B