MEDITATION

calm, peace, cleanse: BREVITY POEM

MEDITATION

 

Shrouded in silver garb

Bare shoulder ponders radiant sun

Salty hair stirs in the faint breeze

Eyes sealed

Mind begs to cleanse

Notions of darkness

Author's Note

What we all need now! Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Exactly - the mind really needs to cleanse. Eyes sealed. Notions of darkness. Such a marvelous piece. Bountiful!

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much, appreciated!
Best B🎄🎄🎄🎄

[Gee]

I have never meditated but whilst on vacation I love to empty my mind whilst laying listening to the shushing of the tide lapping the beach.
Good morning Betty, hope you are well

[Betty Hermelee]

It's not easy to do, I find it difficult, but I'm told that it helps cleanse the mind.... and thanks for the lovely review. Best, B HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Betty. I have been using meditation for many years to find sleep. Took my worst day to be able to meditate. I liked the place you create to seek peace. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks John, I try, but isn’t day, do yoga too! Anything to calm the mind!
Happy holidays!
Warm regards
B.

[Coyote Poetry]

Happy Holidays dear Betty and you are welcome.

[Miss Sharon]

(Mind begs to cleanse Notions of darkness) Indeed this is what the world needs now. Beautifully written. ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Sharon for your lovely review!
Happy holidays!
Best B.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I wonder if the mind was able to succeed.
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

We'll never know J...
Many thanks
B.

[Chris Shaw]

Oh yes. A dose of strong sunlight and meditation. Vitamin D is currently in short supply. The winter days are bleak as well as short and the nights are long and dark. Meaningful brevity dear Betty.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks do much Chris
Stay safe and well,
B

[Patricia]

I love it, meditation is wonderful, it’s like showering away the dirt of the world, the weight of it. Nicely worded.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks, P.... just read your new poem, love it
take good care,B

[Patricia]

you're welcome B. and thank you, so glad you like it. :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Oh love this
I’ve never meditated
I do go to sleep with an app on my phone does that count
Loved your write

[Betty Hermelee]

phone apps are great for some people; I go to a yoga class and we meditate at the end... it's really like cleansing one's cluttered mind...
Take care, B.