LOVE IS A BLUR

misty love,abstraction

LOVE IS A BLUR

 

The fog shrouds me

 

sadly, only a blur among many

 

he solely views

 

the sketch of my frame

 

though the hues of the painting

 

uncover noticeably more

 

I transform into a rainbow

 

yellow, orange, blue, pink

 

after a torrent

 

you can behold my cipher in a fragile mist

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Very visual and that is what first attracted me to this layered write.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Ken, sorry for the delay, a lovely review!
Best, B

[Morgan Hewitt]

Excellent! This piece really spoke to me

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for stopping by to appreciate my poem.
Best, Betty

[Chris Shaw]

I so admire your words as well as your posted image Betty. When love feels like a fog and is unrecognised, how sad that is. However when it appears as a rainbow after a torrent, then surely that is irrisistible. That's where you took me dear poet :)

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much for your kind words Chris, much appreciated
Best to you, B.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Betty... it has been Ages, since I
witnessed a Rainbow. Prior to Five years ago...
we would see at least one large Rainbow across
our Sky every Summer. That must be a "clue"
of climate change-- or something more mysterious.
I tend to wear many colors in every Season...
always for a Reason. Your poem is colored with deep feelings.
tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Ah but this is lovely.; your selective
chosen words placed so eloquently
matches your painting perfectly..
your aura in rainbow hues shines
thru~ the fragile mist.

nice work

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks for a lovely review, much appreciated
Best, B.

[John the Baptist]

Indeed, the fog is an equal opportunity obscurer. It is up to the individual to stand out in its midst. Such is the power of the artist, to trace a vision that gives character to the mist. Is this painting one of yours?

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you John, no this is not mine….but because in the NC mountains we get a lot of fog, thus the poem…lovely review
Best
B.
Ps think I’m using Xliris, they seem to have the resources I need, thank you my dear poet friend🙂