DEVOTION

DEVOTION

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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Are Humans better off? BREVITY POEM

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DEVOTION

 

Downy white and black fur

Swathes my belly

Warmth, murmurs

Soothes my being

And hers

Kindred spirit

Offers devotion

Like no earthly

Forever complies

© 2021 Betty Hermelee


Author's Note

Betty Hermelee
Unconditional love, better off from furies??? thanks for reading

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Our Furry passed away in our arms after
seventeen years of love and devotion.
She is forever in our prayers... her Spirit lives on.
tenderly, Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

oh Pat, that's so sad, pets are so devoted to us and we to them that when they pass it's a terrible .. read more
they are the best .. most vivid impression upon reading is at the beginning .. the warm downy white and black on your belly .. i take it this is about you and your best friend ;) i am a dog person too .. their devotion and companionship is like no other .. nice tribute .. what is your doggy's name?
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and loving pet's devotion to their master....mine is Lucky!
Best, B
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

hi Lucky :)...........
What a cutie. As I read your poem, I have Solo, our dog snuggled up to me. She just can't bear to see me seated on my own. Has to cuddle. Totally devoted to me. Makes me feel special :) Lovely poem Betty.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

That's one living being we can count on!!!
Thanks Chris for your lovely review.
Best, .. read more
Pets are great for giving unconditional love. They don’t care about much as long as we love them and take care of them propperly

Posted 3 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

Pets don't talk back either! Thanks so much for reading!
Best, Betty
Poetic Beauty

3 Years Ago

That is very very true lol 😆

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Added on April 13, 2021
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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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