LUMINARY BOP

LUMINARY BOP

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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LUMINARY BOP

 

Sexy moon

costumed in pink hues

cosmic feast

of colossal dimension

luminaries envelop

rock to moon’s glitter song

on a sandy beach

lovers’ smooch to cool blue vibes

 

© 2021 Betty Hermelee


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A romantic scene beneath a full moon.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

Thank you for a lovely review.
Very nice, it would be a romantic date to be under the moon!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review!
NotUsinganymore

3 Years Ago

You are welcome
'.. rock to moon’s glitter song ~ on a sandy beach ..''

Betty, you've been dreaming again, haven't you!! And, methinks the dream's come true... and what a wonder too. Love the sparkle of this poem, the subtle touches, the abandon, the wonder! Very visual and so finely written.. the perfect post on this sunny day.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

Thanks Emma, I guess I e been dreaming to much!
Always love your reviews, stay well and safe,.. read more
emmajoy

3 Years Ago

Is said that dreams are the desert after a disappointing main course, Betty!

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Added on February 26, 2021
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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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