COSMIC DREAM

Imagination

COSMIC DREAM

     

Lavender, sweet orange, rich amethyst

Compress a deep cobalt sky

Breath of darkness soon encloses

Locks me in a cosmic dream

I ascend to a brilliant star

Somewhere life of sorts prevails

All and sundry float

Slightly overhead

Unknown to brush the glaze

Euphony cascades with moonbeams

Further, celestial dance in abstract forms

Whilst I awaken

My splendid star descends

In a gradual manner

To open my moody eyes

 

Reviews

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting poem, I enjoyed the descriptions.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for reading!

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

The colors made the imagery so much more vivid, and the wording is so beautiful. The words you use make the galaxy feel so big and the image you picked certainly helped, but it all is thanks to your words I can imagine a beautiful galaxy and not just be scared of the endless void.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks for your lovely review.
Best, Betty

[Poetic Beauty]

Love the imagery of floating among the cosmos

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks, appreciate it
Betty

[Arundass TP]

Good work beautiful poem. keep it up.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem,
Betty

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved how you made the words dance to perfection. The use of the language allowed the readers to see your words. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you dear Betty for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks always John for your great and thoughtful reviews, Best, Betty

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Betty.