VEIL OF HOPE

VEIL OF HOPE

 

Breathe, for we are swept

Into a wave of freedom

Close to a calm sea

 

A shear veil of hope

we sense a new dawn

Our mourning expires

 

We spiral, sturdy

With confidence and spirit

Which flows deep inside

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

(A shear veil of hope we sense a new dawn Our mourning expires) Such beautiful hope in these lines of a better tomorrow. Since the death of my only son in 2011 it seems as though I have lost all hope of a better tomorrow. ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

I’m so sorry for your loss; maybe there is a glimmer of hope for all of us, warm regards, Betty

[Laconic Meraki]

This says so much.
I love how the sea isn't so raging anymore.
This too is passing. ❤
#hope
Without hope darling, what do we have?

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much for your review!
Best, Betty

[Laconic Meraki]

Same to you, sunshine. ❤❤❤

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautifully put. I really like the first stanza, it paints a lovely picture in my mind, tyfs

[Lorry]

Why did I just hear that muse song play? The one that goes, "Its a new dawn, a new day a new life, and I'm fee-ee-ling good 😊
I'm surprised that there isn't a review from a candy floss headed oompa loompa below saying" FAKE NEWS! " now that twitter etc have shut him up 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Lorry, appreciate your humor!!! BREATHE!
and thanks for reading...
Best, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

A new day, a new dawn...a new leader, maybe we can get America back again.
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Hopefully, wouldn’t it be great to be “normal” again! Thanks for reading Jacob, yours, B

[John the Baptist]

Indeed, after every darkness comes a dawn. But we have come through one damned long night.

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes we have and it’s not over yet, except hope! Thanks for your review John
Best,
Betty