FRIENDSHIP

FRIENDSHIP

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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A happy poem after a few dark ones

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We blink in sync
five seconds, he's astray
the red head Finch greets me in the morn
in a distinct and inviting play

We cement our friendship
he lands on his perch at dawn
wings flutter, our cryptic wave
he chirps to arouse, as I stretch and yawn

© 2020 Betty Hermelee


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This poem is on my wavelength! Love this: "we blink in sync" . . . and "flutter, a cryptic wave" . . . nicely inventive & fresh ways to describe those momentary brushes with the fluttery ones. I'm trying to be understanding of everyone's crazed response to this crisis, but for me, nothing has changed & life goes on, waiting for these damn frosty morns to subside & let spring begin! Here's hoping you & yours are well (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

4 Years Ago

Thank Margie, needed to write something uplifting in this dark world we're all in now. My granddaugh.. read more
Delightful, playful and taking me back to nature where I am quite happy to be. An uplifting little write Betty, and most welcome it is in these dark days. Keep safe and well my friend.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

4 Years Ago

Thanks Chris, I felt an uplifting poem might brighten the day in this dark world of ours!
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

It gave some welcome respite Betty:)

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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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