THE DRAGON

THE DRAGON

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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pain and suffering

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Dragon pain chews my guts
ventilates with breaths of poison
I recoil once his fumes abate

© 2020 Betty Hermelee


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This is startling imagery that reminds me of how sometimes we get something s****y stuck in our gut, like grinding on something or hating on someone. I usually don't like short poems but you've packed so much into these two I just read, it's all there! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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This is startling imagery that reminds me of how sometimes we get something s****y stuck in our gut, like grinding on something or hating on someone. I usually don't like short poems but you've packed so much into these two I just read, it's all there! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

maybe the breaths of poison help us write...we bathe in it...
then recoil once the fumes of the muse/dragon abate---
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on January 7, 2020
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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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