THE MESSAGE

brevity

If this torn and tattered message finds you

note that I have embraced another

your turn is yet to come

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

how mysterious and intriguing .. my turn is yet to come you say?? ;) she sounds a bit of a vixen to me .. keeping the same tattered message to give and give again ... going through the ex even! ... shameful naughty girl .... but its early in the morning and perhaps i miss your mark completely .. i like the title .. so read the poem .. it is brief for sure ...i think you could easily turn this into a senryu ... that closing line keeps drawing me back .. its a threat and an invitation both at once .. interesting read for me
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[Betty Hermelee]

Time has passed between them; one has found love and gives encouragement to a former lover; that’s the mystery! Thanks for reading!

[Einstein Noodle]

of course ... how stupid i can be sometimes .. duh! ;)

[Betty Hermelee]

That's just my interpretation!!