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A Poem by Betty Boop

Waiting for the sun
and then a night to come
Full of dreams and wishes
of a mother's kisses
Still hoping for a call
to steal me away from this all
But my dreams are fading
and with it all my waiting
Reality has finally arrived
leaving a sun---- I can no longer find 

© 2012 Betty Boop


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Betty Boop
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This seems to be the sad reality life that I can somewhat relate. Where it seems like all you do is wait and wait for something to happen and eventually you get so accustomed to it, you lose track of what you were waiting for in the first place. I hope I am interpreting it correctly...
Very thoughtful written piece either way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Betty Boop

12 Years Ago

You hit it right on the dot (: and thankyou



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I like your style of writing,
It hurts when the people u want to take with you just won't cooperate an u have to leave them behind until they realize their mistake

Posted 11 Years Ago


This seems to be the sad reality life that I can somewhat relate. Where it seems like all you do is wait and wait for something to happen and eventually you get so accustomed to it, you lose track of what you were waiting for in the first place. I hope I am interpreting it correctly...
Very thoughtful written piece either way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Betty Boop

12 Years Ago

You hit it right on the dot (: and thankyou

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Betty Boop
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I'm obsessed with music *I'm a violinist& guitarist I'm a decent artist Music is my "fairyland" escape: it takes alot for me to leave. ;) If you don't like me(& or my poems), I think I de.. more..

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