Fallen Abyss

A young female named Chaliss Gallendar, only 17, is a demon-vampire. She was born into the Gallendar clan, being the "outcast". At 12, she went to a witch, praying she can control Abertha...

It was mid October as the young twelve year old child sat in her darkened Chinese themed room, trying not to scream. 
She was leaving that evening, which hurt her more than ever, since she was also leaving a fourteen year old brother and a three year old sister.
They knew she was going, and why she was, it was easy to figure out: she was growing insane by a demon hiding inside her; Abertha.
Abertha was laughing inside the female's mind. She had the voice of a siren, echoing inside her mind. 
"Where we going now?" She asked, echoing as if she was the voice inside a schizophrenic. 
"Shut up!" Chaliss yelled, her bright red hair falling to her face as she did. She let out a sigh, looking up at the wooden door, hoping no one heard her.
She frowned, getting up, grabbing her light violet colored bags.
As she was exciting the tanned home, a young, pale child went to her.
"Sissy..." She mumbled, rubbing her darkened eyes. "Imma mizz youz.." Being only three, at times she was hard to understand.
"I'll miss you too squirt." She smiled, kissing the top of Marcy's head. "Be good until I return, okay?" Marcy simply nodded in response.

Author's Note

This is my first attempt at this, and I am unsure if it is alright. If I get enough good reviews, I will write it more in a book. I don't want any hates saying "it sucks!" and crap like that. If it sucks, simply tell me why please. :) & also, I am just brainstorming off and on, so it will not be my best.

OH YES! Thank you SOOOO much for all who had helped me!! There was "Tekki",who will jump in later, "Bryce",who helped me create Chaliss & Aberha & gave me details when I needed them, "Marcy", my so called sister , Bryce's "Wife" who we are still trying to work on & was supportive as much as everyone else, and of course, I can not forget "Alexnadria", who helped me step by step when I needed someone.

Yes, I know I am using Erza Scarlet for Chaliss. She was good to use, and closest to how I envisioned Chaliss.

Also, sorry it is short. I am testing out how people will respond & if they will like it or not. I'll make two more short stories like this: where she is with Alexandria & when she returns.