don't have one

these are just some lyrics i made up a few weeks ago i hope you like them.

you came then you went
our friendship was spent
now your gone.
i missed you so much
i needed your touch
but your gone.

i cant believe i was deceived by you oo oh,
all you left was a note
what was i supposed to think

it said im going away i know you'll forgive me someday
but i cant forgive you
i don't want to forgive you

(c) its not fair
whenever i get something it goes away
whys it so hard for anything to stay
its so unfair
its hard to believe people like you
when i have to watch everything you do
and now im tired
of playing games
i just need some time on my own

(v2)

when we were kids
we laughed and we played
we knew every joke
that people would say

but we're older now
and i have found out
that you are not worth it

(c)

i was standing alone
waiting for you to come
i was pushed asside
still waiting for you to come

(spoken)
yeah its not fair
whenever i get something it goes away
why's it so hard for anything to stay

(sung)
(c x2)

Author's Note

Hope you like it!

Reviews

[O Bubbly_snowflake *]

Aw, I love the message behind it!!!
As a peom the rhyme scheme might need a bit of tweeking, but as a song, it all depends on the tune, so it just might work! But a beat to it~

[Simple_mee]

Its good. Just needs a ll' refinement. U could work a bit more with ur ryhme scheme. The message and purpose behind the write was nice....
Well done! Cheers...