A Square World

 

I locked myself within four walls-

Someday when I had a chaotic mind

Wondered how the earth doesn’t fall,

In spite of spinning round & round!

 

A ball pen rested on a table brown,

Kept her engaged; spilled her dark fluid,

Swirling thoughts, not sure of where they end,

Pulled them hard and laid them down!

 

One by one they decorated my book,

Fitting inside the perfectly spaced lines

Flushing the musings off the confined pack,

Mind was then freed from the confined chains!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I indeed liked this poem...actually that title A SQUARE WORLD was indeed very nice....Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...

[Mayank]

Good write, the ink decorated page was a good imagery...

[Deepika]

Thank you mayank :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

back and how.... again at your creative best... please dont take such a long break in your writings... good one

[Deepika]

Thanks Anurag :) Held up with much work these days.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The rhymes and all well as the lines are all beautiful my friend. Amazing piece of work!

[Deepika]

Thank you friend :)

[AaronFreitas]

It's amazing what we can think and create when we lock ourselves in a room alone with our mind. And to write those feelings and thoughts out is to break free from whatever it's holding us to. Awesome write :)

[AaronFreitas]

Oh and cute pic!

[Deepika]

Thanks for the kind review and compliment Aaron :)

[Abilash Uttama]

Writing to get rid of frustration,Nice poem senior. it's nice to hear from you:)

[Deepika]

Thank you junior :)

[Ana B.]

A beautiful vision dear Deepika, glad to hear from you :)

[Deepika]

Thank you Ana :)

[Tks]

Aaaaaaargghh!!! The frustration was real, wasnt it? Im glad you managed to break free of those manacles and write freely!

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[Deepika]

Thanks for your kind review :)

[Emily]

I really like this one!
Keep it up!

[Deepika]

Thank you Emily :)

[Prashant Rajput]

It's always wonderful to read your work...again you have jotted down your feelings very well.
Your lines are absolutely amazing and they clearly reflects your deep emotions😊

[Deepika]

Thanks much Prashant for your appreciation! :)