Literal Love Story

Pen to the paper:

You are one among the very few that I trust,

So I don’t hesitate, but everything I entrust,

My joys when I’m excited,

Woes  when I’m dejected,

Blots when I’m confused,

Scrathes when I’m frustrated

You are smashed at my mistake,

At times blown as a rocket,

Or sold in the market,

While I stay cozy in the pocket!

You are pure white with no mark,

And I leave you polluted and dark

I silently lust for your company,

When typewriter creates a better harmony!

Paper to the pen:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

My dear, I crave for you of which you ‘ve no clue!

I’m cherished only when you emit a vibrant cue,

I’m striked when you seem low,

I gain my value based on your flow,

At times you are replaced by the typewriter,

But his words make no sense without your signature!

Apart from you pencil talks to me without any bound,

But I preserve your words as they are profound

You and me make a great pair,

Let’s make the life fair!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

What an affair.......
pen and paper........cute pair.....
love is like that.........you destroy each other completely.........and love it!!!
LOVE IS CRAZY.period.
you have a great imagination......and gifted pen.......
another awesome poem........
i loved it!!!
:)

[Deepika]

Aww..thanks a lot Pushkar for your beautiful comment! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are most welcome...........!!! :) :)

[Abilash Uttama]

seems like you were holding back these creative ideas and now you are back with blast, it's good to see you in form. loved your poem !

[Deepika]

Haha..thanks junior :) Actually depends on my mood!

[Shubham Joshi]

Wow what I believe is that nothing or no poem on love can ever be beautiful than this. This tale of pen and paper and their journey of always being together... I loved this poem.

[Deepika]

Agree with you! Thanks Shubham for your lovely insight :)

[Saddam]

Wooww!!!!!!!!!
That's amazing love with each other.
Kash! love story kush lambi chalti.
I found it rare and one of different style.

[Deepika]

Haha.. May be I should have thought of a better climax ;) Thanks Saddam for your sweet review :)

[Saddam]

You're welcome dear always....

[W R Stowe]

Quite unique love affair with words that flow if things go stray just simply re-write and there will always be a happy ending nice flow of pen

[Deepika]

Thanks for the review dear friend :)

[W R Stowe]

your welcome

[Sami Khalil]

A great poem with your hallmark style and signature. Applause...:)............

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Sami :))

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).... .....

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write!
The relationship a lot of writers have, but you are one that is aware
of it and embraces this affair you have, not all writers have come to
terms with this relationship and with you doing so, I believe it shows
in your amazing poetry! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Deepika]

That means a lot! Thanks James for your kind words :)

[Jamestown]

You are welcome!

[AaronFreitas]

That is awesome the creative way you wrote this poem Deepika :) I loved it good work my friend

[Deepika]

Thanks much Aaron for your valuable words :)

[Ana B.]

Absolutely gorgeous and genial dear Deepika, love how your mind works girl :)

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Ana! I'm pleased that you like my thoughts :)

[Ana B.]

Your welcome :)

[Emily]

I love it!
Keep it up!
My new favorite of yours!

[Deepika]

Thank you Emily! Means a lot :))

[Jeyanthi]

It is beautiful. You are giving form to many materials. :P

I like it ... :)

[Deepika]

Thank you Jeyanthi :) Glad you like them!