Literal Love Story

Pen to the paper:

You are one among the very few that I trust,

So I don’t hesitate, but everything I entrust,

My joys when I’m excited,

Woes  when I’m dejected,

Blots when I’m confused,

Scrathes when I’m frustrated

You are smashed at my mistake,

At times blown as a rocket,

Or sold in the market,

While I stay cozy in the pocket!

You are pure white with no mark,

And I leave you polluted and dark

I silently lust for your company,

When typewriter creates a better harmony!

Paper to the pen:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

My dear, I crave for you of which you ‘ve no clue!

I’m cherished only when you emit a vibrant cue,

I’m striked when you seem low,

I gain my value based on your flow,

At times you are replaced by the typewriter,

But his words make no sense without your signature!

Apart from you pencil talks to me without any bound,

But I preserve your words as they are profound

You and me make a great pair,

Let’s make the life fair!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

What an affair.......
pen and paper........cute pair.....
love is like that.........you destroy each other completely.........and love it!!!
LOVE IS CRAZY.period.
you have a great imagination......and gifted pen.......
another awesome poem........
i loved it!!!
:)

[Deepika]

Aww..thanks a lot Pushkar for your beautiful comment! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are most welcome...........!!! :) :)

[Antoñyo]

Very clever and impressive piece...rather brilliant actually.

Thanks for the share

[makoy]

Pretty impressed with the way you see things. You have great eyes for things coupled with your great brewing of words. Awesome!

[Deepika]

Thank you dear friend! :)

[Ayank Chourasia]

this is the best one yet for me..deepika you are very observant finding such a cute topic and story isn't everyone's cup of tea i loved it..it made me blush and smile all the same time thanks for sharing deepika keep wriitng i look forward for more

[Deepika]

Thank you ayank for the lovely compliment! Glad you liked it :)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Wow this is soooooooooo awesome. It's completely original and massively creative. I would never think to write something like this. But this relationship is truly on of the best. Its one that has survived since its beginning. And its keeps on going strong amongst many difficulties such as typewriters, computers and so many of manmade technologies. Great job once again. Stay inspired.

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Kristan for you lovely insight! That means a lot to me :))

[A. Amos]

Your world of creative writing takes your readers to different part of the world, that is form of magic and your spell:) simply amazing

[Deepika]

Thank you so much dear friend for stopping by and for the kind review :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome and all the best

[613]

This is written very well! I enjoyed it so much.

- Brittney

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot Brittney :)

[613]

You're welcome!

[Avinash]

I love the way you are able to instill life through your perspective in things which often receive our nonchalant attention. I guess you are best when you do that.

[Deepika]

Means a lot! Thanks Avinash :)

[Prashant Pandey]

cute one.
I’m striked when you seem low,
I gain my value based on your flow (best lines)
lovely affair and lovely poem.

[Deepika]

Thank you much Prashant :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

kha se laate ho yeh ideas...Miss Creativity... aur kucch baccha hai abhi....itna kaise socch lete ho :)
matlab koi bhi cheez dekho aur ussko link karke itni badia poem likh do....now I will try the same too... wont be able to write this brilliant but.... :)

[Deepika]

Haha..Thanks Anurag :D I too have no clue how these kinda topics enter my head ;P Well, you too give a try, I would be glad to read and if possible add to it :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

but let me think like Miss Creativity for few minutes.... I will certainly need your kind feedback...but let me try to be crazy like you first..:)

[Deepika]

haha..try on the same topics in your style ;)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

I have written it... check it out :)

[Ayank Chourasia]

that nickname suits here she is brilliant

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

you are the owner of great imagination . i liked it very much

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Harpreet for your valuable time :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

your welcome g