A Blind girl

In the voice of a girl who looses her pleasure of sight one day..

I hope my fave red dress didn’t fade after laundry,

I believe the moon is still focused over my territory,

I wish I could have a glimpse of my crush somewhere,

Mirror no more can lie to me that I look all fair

 

Where does my once admired eye now stare?

Did the sun loose his charm & hide behind the sea forever?

Cockroach can no more scare me with her long antenna,

Dark mascara has penetrated beyond my eyelids till my retina

 

Don’t use glycerin, I no more can see your tears honey,

Neither sympathize me, I just don’t need any,

Glittering things still don’t fall under my list of fallacy,

There’s a deeper pain hidden in me than the fire of jealousy

 

I might have no sight, but definitely a vision,

Pumping the red blood is still my heart’s mission,

Ears have become smarter to the waves that it receive,

My skin urges for the warmth that’ll never deceive!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Man we don't understand just how important our sight is. I couldn't imagine being blind and how different life would be. Very good work my friend :)

[Deepika]

Agree with you!Thank you Aaron :)

[Ana B.]

A very intense this one. The first stanza is my favourite, stunning poetry Deepika!

[Deepika]

Thanks much Ana! :)

[Prashant Pandey]

I might have no sight, but definitely a vision,
Pumping the red blood is still my heart’s mission,
Splendid lines. Great job Deepika.

[Deepika]

Thank you much Prashant :))

[Prashant Pandey]

Your welcome.

[Emily]

Great idea for a poem!
Your poems inspire me!
Keep it up!

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot Emily :) Glad you find them inspiring!

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic piece of work!
Sad but also inspiring girl goes blind but leans
on positive thinking rather then negative outlook:)
Love it, I don't know if I would be so gracious
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Deepika]

I appreciate your words..Thanks a lot James! :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

How can you write so brilliantly? This one is another gem from you....a brilliant brilliant piece from one of my favorite poetess.....iss se zyada nhi tareef kar sakta buss ;P

[Deepika]

Aww..Thank you so much anurag :)) that's indeed a great compliment!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

yes that it is... i know :)

[Rounak Jain]

beautiful. very matured write up.
Cockroach can no more scare me with her long antenna,
Dark mascara has penetrated beyond my eyelids till my retina
My skin urges for the warmth that’ll never deceive!

Those 3 lines were the best.

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Rounak :) means a lot!

[ANTO]

Gobsmacked here Deepika - girl gone blind but immediately looking to the positives - but first addressing the aspects that are neither; just cold hard facts.
The newer enhanced senses are all thats needed now - and how much more they will deliver truth than the easily deceived eyes.
This is really strongly worded Deepika. Into the library it goes.
Bravo!
:)

[Deepika]

My pleasure! Thanks a lot Anto for your beautiful review :))

[ANTO]

You're welcome Deepika
:)

[Abilash Uttama]

A heart touching mesmerizing piece, Amazing work !

[Deepika]

thanks a lot Abilash :))

[Shubham Joshi]

wow.... that's best from you i think

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Shubham :) It's close to my heart as I believe sight is a beautiful gift one can have.