Never give up

There’s a day following every night,

Life’s a struggle, just don’t forget

Take the charge and design your pace,

You’ll soon know the meaning of your existence

 

Moon is never weary of cooling the earth,

With several hard hits an Idol takes its birth,

Earth with no shows revolves round the sun,

Soul saved from a storm gives you life’s lesson

 

Death is something that’s just inevitable,

Don’t let any pain make you feeble,

You might never get all that you wish for,

Yet all are equal in the eyes of the creator

 

Time’s tick is your invitation to walk with it,

Ever advancing time has got to teach you a lot,

Some day those lessons serve you as a guide,

Towards your goal happily make a stride!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ana B.]

Beautiful work! Love the second stanza :) Lovely poem Deepika.

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot Ana :))

[stansg]

Towards your goal happily make a stride.
Liked this line a lot, many a times we get so entangled with the problems of life that we forget our goal and forget to be happy. I think if we have our goal perfectly in sight we will never be moved by any problems or struggles that come along the way.
Good work.

[Deepika]

Thank you so much stansg for your valuable insight :))

[AaronFreitas]

A very good work Deepika! I really enjoyed it my friend :)

[Deepika]

Thank you Aaron for your kind review! :)

[Saddam]

It is not strange currently I just finished a poem titled with same for self motivation.
Here another beautiful write dear. Motivate yourself daily. Great read dear.

Time’s tick is your invitation to walk with it,
Ever advancing time has got to teach you a lot,

[Deepika]

Thank you Saddam for your motivating words :))

[Saddam]

You're most welcome dear.

[Abilash Uttama]

Feeling motivated, nice work senior :)

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Abilash! :)