Never give up

There’s a day following every night,

Life’s a struggle, just don’t forget

Take the charge and design your pace,

You’ll soon know the meaning of your existence

 

Moon is never weary of cooling the earth,

With several hard hits an Idol takes its birth,

Earth with no shows revolves round the sun,

Soul saved from a storm gives you life’s lesson

 

Death is something that’s just inevitable,

Don’t let any pain make you feeble,

You might never get all that you wish for,

Yet all are equal in the eyes of the creator

 

Time’s tick is your invitation to walk with it,

Ever advancing time has got to teach you a lot,

Some day those lessons serve you as a guide,

Towards your goal happily make a stride!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

It's a nice poeme. I like it so much. It's sound good. Thanks for sharing.

[Mitali Shah]

Don’t let any pain make you feeble---completely agreee

[Deepika]

Thanks for the review Mitali :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

u r d for decent deepika. great job

[Deepika]

haha..Thanks dear friend :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

your welcome g

[MOON]

Motivational read , full of hope sad too , enjoyed.

[Deepika]

thanks a lot friend for dropping by :)

[Shubham Joshi]

towards my goal i am making a stride
and yet it's not a free ride
i might never get all that i wish for
but i am the birth of the creator above all
and the lord of my universe that's all
every day i wake up
and say NEVER GIVE UP...
great that' s a poem nicely done.

[Deepika]

thanks a lot Shubham for your kind review! :)

[Shubham Joshi]

welcome to you

[Pushkar Prabhat]

important life lessons......
beautifully penned......

"Time’s tick is your invitation to walk with it,"

bravo!!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Deepika]

thanks a lot Pushkar :))

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Avinash]

Motivating and uplifting, like a marching army band on a road called life.

[Deepika]

Thank you avinash for the kind review :)

[Sher A. Lynn]

I adore the positivity in this piece. Never give up, never surrender.

[Deepika]

Thank you Sher Lynn:))

[Jeyanthi]

Its so enchanting. Radiating positive thoughts.

God bless you!

[Deepika]

thank you jeyanthi for your cute review :)

[Prashant Pandey]

Another hit.Depicted it with different and beautiful scenarios. great.

[Deepika]

thank you Prashant :)