All-Littered Life

 

Ailing Affronts,

Burning Bruises,

Injurious Incidents

Expensive Experiences

Threatening Thoughts,

Screaming Silence

Quaking Quarrels,

Misleading Morals

 

Reckless Rejections,

Hopeless Hopes

Lewd Lust,

Virtual Vanity

 

Dreadful Displeasure,

Unanticipated upshot

Wistful waltz,

Perilous plots

 

Fearsome fights

Chaining cuffs,

Oppressed orphans,

Needless narcissism

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[ANTO]

Great alliteration Deepika - and the title is one I wish I'd created lol

I was checking for a hidden acrostic or even anagrams thinking you had booby-trapped this in some way - such is your reputation with the pen.

I could see tis being read aloud at a poetry night, with vigour.

So this is where we (humanity) are at now - makes for a terrible Curriculum Vitae for our species.

I did find a little ray of hope in this - lets say it was an 'unanticipated upshot' of reading this ;p
Very cool Deepika - done with confident style. :)

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Anto :) Great expectations from me, I'm humbled ;) The title and the writing are linked, I wrote 2 lines that had alliterations which I later realized, that's when I thought of the title, and with the title I got an idea to a add line beginning with each alphabet, but it was difficult :P(esp. for letters like x and z) .Didn't think of anagrams :P

[ANTO]

Its a great result from an exercise designed to push the poets limits - its the gym for the poets quill, pen-training if you will. ;))

[Deepika]

you can say so! :D

[Double T]

This is a great poem with a strong message written on its back. :)

[Deepika]

Thank you dear friend :))

[Rounak Jain]

Damn. Bleak. Dark. Vile. Daunting. Harsh reality. Its gonna be haunting. message is intimidating. Reminding me of my to do list that went evanescent. Shaken. Thanks for sharing.

[Deepika]

Aww thanks rounak for the prolific comment :))

[Saravanan Evu]

Sounds looks different ... Keep Writing! :)

[Deepika]

Thanks saravanan :))

[CA Anurag Sharma]

You tried something different with it and I have to say that you have nailed it quite well....a very nice write up....off-late you have been trying to be different with your work and thats actually very nice....

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Anurag :))

[Abilash Uttama]

Well that's what life is. nice piece senior!

[Deepika]

Thank you much my junior :)

[Yusuf Qaizar]

Nice and short. Well done.

[Deepika]

Thank you much Yusuf :)

[Emily]

A nice short poem!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot Emily :)

[AaronFreitas]

A very creative way to write... i love the structure of this.
This is truly an inspirational piece to be more creative when
I write. Thank you and awesome work!!!

[Deepika]

Thank you aaron :) I'm glad you found it inspiring :))

[Jamestown]

This piece is marvelous! The wording and message is fantastic!
The talent you have is a blessing to my eyes, truly your work,
inspires me to get better not only as a poet but as a person:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Deepika]

Thank you so much James :) I'm humbled! Your words mean a lot to me as they help me get better :))

[Jamestown]

You are so welcome!