Great alliteration Deepika - and the title is one I wish I'd created lol
I was checking for a hidden acrostic or even anagrams thinking you had booby-trapped this in some way - such is your reputation with the pen.
I could see tis being read aloud at a poetry night, with vigour.
So this is where we (humanity) are at now - makes for a terrible Curriculum Vitae for our species.
I did find a little ray of hope in this - lets say it was an 'unanticipated upshot' of reading this ;p
Very cool Deepika - done with confident style. :)
Thank you so much Anto :) Great expectations from me, I'm humbled ;) The title and the writing are l.. read moreThank you so much Anto :) Great expectations from me, I'm humbled ;) The title and the writing are linked, I wrote 2 lines that had alliterations which I later realized, that's when I thought of the title, and with the title I got an idea to a add line beginning with each alphabet, but it was difficult :P(esp. for letters like x and z) .Didn't think of anagrams :P
10 Years Ago
Its a great result from an exercise designed to push the poets limits - its the gym for the poets qu.. read moreIts a great result from an exercise designed to push the poets limits - its the gym for the poets quill, pen-training if you will. ;))
I love the whim chim nature of write. You put here a very fantastic art of old craft into new frame. Great, I love it. I tried many times but after three or four lines it lost the rhythm. Your write is amazing.
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10 Years Ago
thank you so much Saddam for your beautiful review :))
10 Years Ago
You are golden hand dear, You are most welcome, always.
wow!! its fab...such a wonderful collection of words that i had to open a dictionery for every sentence. great job deepika.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
haha..thanks Nikhil :) Myself took aid of dictionary for few words XD this was an exercise for me to.. read morehaha..thanks Nikhil :) Myself took aid of dictionary for few words XD this was an exercise for me to enrich vocabulary :P
The alliterations just stole my heart away.. phenomenal write..
I wish the world you described takes a correct turn and be better :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much nazia :)) if i could think of the poem title as 'glittering life' instead of litte.. read moreThank you so much nazia :)) if i could think of the poem title as 'glittering life' instead of littered life;)