Happy Realization

There were some that enjoyed frisking with my emotion,

There were some that were over-familiar with my affection

There were some that didn’t value my respect,

There were some that sued me for no wrong act,

There were some that burnt with envy watching me progress,

There were some that blocked my way to success,            

But now,

I have preserved my feelings in a closet,

My kindness towards them is worn out,

I’m convinced they don’t deserve my respect,

Their actions or words nowhere seem perfect,

I add some more fuel to their discontent,

I start exploring better ways and shortcuts

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
seems like my life...........
beautifully done.....
i loved it!!!!
:)

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot pushkar! :)glad you could relate!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome........!!!! :) :)

[Brummy59]

This is very nice. Maybe change over-familiar with different word. You can feel the emotion in it, you can feel your rejection to their actions and the resentment towards them. Kudos :)

[Deepika]

Thanks dear friend :) By over-familiar i meant that it was too inexpensive to value. Thanks for the suggestion :)

[Brummy59]

I know, I meant replace it with a synonym. :) of course! Your writing style is beautiful. :)

[Rounak Jain]

I add some more fuel to their discontent,

I start exploring better ways and shortcuts ..... superb. short and sweet this was.

[Deepika]

Thanks much Rounak!:) You are always supportive :)

[Rounak Jain]

You got it. :) thanks... :p

[Jamestown]

Sad how some look forward to your failure!
The last stanza is terrific, that's what you have to do sometimes!
Great write, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot James :)) Your review is much appreciated!

[Abilash Uttama]

It's good to be nice but sometimes it's better other way round ;) Nice poem.

[Deepika]

Exactly! Thanks Abilash for your kind review:)

[ANTO]

This should be on a poster on every classroom in the world! Its is a modern guide to survive Life. Adaptability, self-reliance, measured emotional living, continued learning, self exploration - its all here Deepika - on every classroom I tell you (and I'll print it out for myself - I could do with a good guide - Heaven knows how i surveved up til now !! xD )

You are a leading light here Deepika, and your words a torch, in my opinion :))

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Anto:) I'm humbled! I always go through your new works but hold back from commenting 'cause I admire the way you review and I run short of words to give an elaborate and artistic comments like you ;)

[Samhitha Mopati]

An enjoyable poem!
Many people envy our progress in life and plan for our failure!
Accepting their enviousness with grace becomes a virtue.
There is no necessity of showing them our worth because our humbleness and modesty would ultimately reign!

[Deepika]

Very true. Thanks Samhitha for your lovely insight :)