Insanity

Boiling rage, yet tolerant smile

Gushing thoughts, yet forbidding silence

Ugly faces, yet alluring masks

Youthful mind, yet withholding conduct

Smashing agony, yet lofty pride

Basic emotions, all locked inside the society!

 

Explode once, to show your limits

Speak out mind, as thoughts just multiply

Beauty is short-time, throw that mask away

There's no second chance, let your heart say

Don't shield tears, let them make way

As Life is too short, let there be some insanity!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Double T]

Cool! This is a great poem. No doubt about.

[Deepika]

Thanks you so much :))

[Jeyanthi]

Wow! Amazing poem. Dare saying.

We should example of path creator rather than path finder.

[Deepika]

Thanks Jeyanthi :))

[Devanshu Rajput]

There are many masquerades and impostors in our society, who always obscure their faces. People in this world want to veil, who they are.

A lovely poem, pertaining that section of society.

A superb poem!!!!!!

Devanshu

[Deepika]

True! Thank you so much Devanshu :))

[Devanshu Rajput]

You are welcome......

[Samhitha Mopati]

Beautifully woven! Your poem gushes us to to vent out anger and be spontaneous in this world of diplomacy and secrecy! :) Totally provocative!

[Deepika]

thank you samhitha for your lovely comment :)

[Ana B.]

I love this poem, everybody should be reminded that there's nothing better than just letting go and be a little wild and rough.

[Deepika]

Agreed(y) thanks Ana :))

[AaronFreitas]

Love this piece! Very well done :)

[Deepika]

Thanks much Aaron :))

[Demii]

"Explode once, to show your limits
Speak out mind, as thoughts just multiply
Beauty is short-time, throw that mask away
There's no second chance, let your heart say"
This is absolute beautiful ! Great for young readers to read and build up self esteem, I really enjoyed reading this, I hope you can catch time to read some of mine. :)

[Deepika]

Thank you Demii for dropping by :) Will soon find time and explore your page :)

[Emily]

Nicely written!
Well done!

[Deepika]

Thank you Emily :))

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bravo!!!
amazingly worded!!!
loved the message
loved it all!!!!
:)
happy holi!!! go insane!!!

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot for dropping by Pushkar :)) Happy Holi !! :)

[Not here]

Lol i really liked this poem. Great job and great message!

[Deepika]

thank you so much David :))