Insanity

Boiling rage, yet tolerant smile

Gushing thoughts, yet forbidding silence

Ugly faces, yet alluring masks

Youthful mind, yet withholding conduct

Smashing agony, yet lofty pride

Basic emotions, all locked inside the society!

 

Explode once, to show your limits

Speak out mind, as thoughts just multiply

Beauty is short-time, throw that mask away

There's no second chance, let your heart say

Don't shield tears, let them make way

As Life is too short, let there be some insanity!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Shubham Joshi]

I feel proud to be insane.
There is no good in being sane.
Insanity brings life and soul to a loose
And that's what for myself i choose.

[Deepika]

Wow! Nice lines and i appreciate your comment :)

[Mayank]

nice write, insanity delivers lot more than sanity...

[Deepika]

True..Thanks Mayank for the review :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Liked the subject. love the way you look into things n describe them Ma'am

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Nitesh :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Wow.... a great write.... this is what I think too.... brilliant Deepika

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Anurag :) Glad you could relate!

[Ehra Khan]

A very fascinating write! Love the way you have described the insanity and frustration! keep it up! :)

[Deepika]

Thank you so much dear friend :))

[Jamie]

Great wordplay! Fantastic write!

[Deepika]

Thanks Jamie for dropping by :))

[Jamie]

You're welcome :) Feel free to review my stuff :)

[Deepika]

Surely will do :)

[Saddam]

Heheee........ Its wonderful poem.
I enjoy it totally.....

[Deepika]

Thanks Ssadd :))

[Saravanan Evu]

Nice piece of writing... :)

[Deepika]

Thanks Saravanan :))

[Rounak Jain]

I just love reading your poems. Simple yet powerful. Amazing. I agree to the 2nd para word by word. Life is short, let there be some insanity. speak up, cry, explode. be insane. :) this rekindles me at the dead hrs of the day. lol.

[Deepika]

Pleased to hear that! Thanks a lot Rounak :))