My Table Alarm Clock

Every dawn she wakes me up with my fave song,

Yet, I slap her tight at first and make her cease,

She acts patient, but not for too long,

I'm out of couch with her repeated Snooze!

 

Some day she frowned and kept herself mum,

That's when I faced a total swamped day!

To whitewash, I blamed her in front of some,

Not accepting my fault in  the course of  the delay!

 

This night I ask her to change her tune,

Assuming I was lost in its melody last night,

Morning she sings merrily in a harsh tone,

This time she gets a slap that's even tight!

 

One day she was bugged with my way of acting,

She planned to find an end of herself,

By jumping off from her homely shelf!

Now I realize her standing,

When I had to spend my day without her,

More so when I was penalized on her repair!

Reviews

[Rounak Jain]

This time she gets a slap thats even tight.. Hillarious. Nice.

[Deepika]

Thanks Rounak :D

[Prashant Pandey]

wow, amazing lines. morning annoyance of alarm is very creatively written down.

[Deepika]

Thank you Prashant :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Wow dedicating a poem to ur clock i think you have good emotions even with all your things...........nice well written.....

[Deepika]

Somewhat true..Though I'm careless quite often :P Thank you :)

[Abilash Uttama]

nice and creative poem, and I'm sure things will work out good between you and your clock for you have written such a beautiful poem for her and will take good care of her because money matters...:D

[Deepika]

Haha true :P thank you so much for your valuable time. :)

[Abilash Uttama]

pleasure is mine and I'll be more than happy if someday you'll review my work too and yes it's a read request through comment.. :P

[Prashant Rajput]

wonderful write Deepika...your work is very realistic,the way in which you described the 'poor' clock is outstanding.I enjoyed it.

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Prashant :)

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

The title is simle yet eye-catching and very apt for this lovely poem! Excellent work, Deepika! Loved it! Thanks for sharing!☺

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot Anjana !:)

[Roshan Nair]

The personification and the way you emoted the clock was really really fun to read! seemed so real, the despair and frustration of the inanimate towards mans misgivings. Lovely piece deepika :)

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Roshan! :)

[ANTO]

This is really fun! Poor clock getting the blame for the authors tardiness - no wonder 'she' wanted to slide off her mortal coil (or would that be spring - or cog - no matter)
Money talks and alarm clock walks once more -
I enjoyed the mirth here. Thanks for the RR. Deepika :))

[Deepika]

Thanks for your lovely comments Anto :) pleased you like it.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

NIce poem really enjoyed reading it.... keep writing :)

[Deepika]

Thank you friend :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

hahaha...good one....alarm clock... difficult to live with it and without it,,,,,

[Deepika]

True! Thanks Anurag :)