When efforts go in vain..

When questions go out of preparation in an exam,

It's hard to be contended by not giving it a damn

Birds are not tied up to face the same!

 

When boss ignores all your hard work,

It surely fails to lend an ego stroke

Lion never bows before anyone in its park!

 

When house wife toils hard at home all day,

She's hurt if her hubby carelessly walks away

Tigress doesn't have to hunt to impress this way!

 

When doctors try their best to rescue the patient,

It blows them hard when they hear a complaint

Cow serves billions without keeping any account!

 

When soldier fights ignoring all his aches,

It's pathetic if he's attacked behind his back

Elephants are not obligated to guard the woods being so majestic!

 

When artist begs for a chance to make a day’s meal,

If misused it gives a bitter slap to her zeal

Without any stipend sings, a Nightingale!

 

These are the few taxes for being too rational,

Don't give up as they are just unavoidable!

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

This reminds me of something I once read by Yaqub Beg, a close person to him had a very similar philosophy.

[Deepika]

Thank you for stopping by :)

[Roshan Nair]

We are here and we are here not to ay any dues to anyone..its our passion that lasts us and all that obstructs or stifles is just the way life is structured.
Great piece, a very true and real world interpretation of fairness
Cheers deepika!

[Deepika]

Thank you Roshan :)

[Royal Rathore DSR]

Broad as well..keep sharing..

[Deepika]

Thanks for motivation :)

[Prashant Rajput]

Beautiful words,expressed in a beautiful way and written by a beautiful heart...I enjoyed it writing.

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Prashant :)

[Prashant Rajput]

you are welcome...this is very good work,I've written down all these lines in my diary.

[Deepika]

That's indeed a great compliment to me :)

[Vishuddha]

Perhaps they are not unavoidable. Just suppose everyone saw the world as you do. It would be a paradise. But, for now it is not. It is a struggle. Your words remind us how to be happy while we are struggling. Thank you for them.

[Deepika]

Thanks for stopping by..Glad you liked it:)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

First of all... it has been beautifully written with every para depicting a different story,,,, secondly I liked the message in it... the last two lines are brilliant..... the presentation using the colors add more value to this beautiful piece..... kudos!

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot! :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

beautiful poem......loved reading it......
keep writing :)

[Deepika]

Thank you! :)

[Saddam]

When questions go out of your preparation in exam
It's hard to be contended by not giving it a damn,
Birds are not tied up to face the same!

Ha I am connected with this. I have a exam and things are not coming in my mind.
Beautiful dear... Excellent.

[Deepika]

haha..thank you so much friend :)

[Saddam]

Smiless............