What nature can teach you!

Observe the Ants marching in a Line,

They showcase a life of Discipline!

 

Take some time and enjoy a Peacock’s Dance,

His moves hold the mirrors of High Confidence!

 

Stare at a Cockroach before you cutoff his thrive,

There lies a strong Determination to Live!

 

Learn from a Chameleon how to be Adaptive,

There you get another tip to Survive!

 

Don’t frown at the sight of an Eagle,

Its Vision is as sharp as a needle!

 

Feed a puppy for once, a bowl full,

He’s gonna remain life-time Faithful!

 

Just don’t gaze the bees when they’re working round the clock,

But grasp the sweet essence of their Hard work!

 

Spill some grain for a Crow to feed,

You’ll find it Sharing with its entire breed!

Beautiful  Butterfly with just a span of few days

She shows you how to make your Cheerful in several ways!

 

Milk & ghee, cheese and butter you get from a cow,

Selflessly she serves for which you gotta give her a bow!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Rounak Jain]

Take some time and enjoy a Peacock’s Dance,
His moves hold the mirrors of High Confidence!

It should be HER not him. No?.... and lovely poem. Nice presentation. Congrats on your award :)
I didnt knew about crow that it shares.
Good one.

[Deepika]

As per my knowledge, it's peacock and not the peahen who's known for the splendid feathers/tail and impressive sway :P I've seen crows feeding in a group most often :)
Thank you so much Rounak:))

[Rounak Jain]

oh ya. I got confused. :P

[LuLuIcey]

I love your piece! Nature teaches us a lot that we never knew that. We always forgot him and everyone is just pollute him. I love the sea and well, I learnt from it. I share with him, and be with him.
Last but not the least, good job highlighting the important words. Cheers XD.

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot for your commendable words:))

[Roshan Nair]

Wonderful peace.. almost got me thinking about proverbs and similes we used to learn as innocent children but couldnt understand the power of.
Great work deepika :)

[Deepika]

Thank you Roshan :)

[Vishuddha]

You are a good teacher. These are good lessons. Thank you for sharing them.

[Deepika]

Thanks for reading :) Means a lot!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

i liked it........ enjoyed reading it ... :)

[Deepika]

Glad you liked it :) thanks for your time!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

My pleasure :)

[ANTO]

If everyone aimed for these ideals then we would not be in the messed up world we are in now - I often wonder why is it that the people like you are here in poetry forums on the internet and not on the world's stage leading us towards our enlightenment - I dont know the answer but I'll bet that 'evil' keeps them up where they are and keeps us where we are.
You penned a virtual humanitarian manifesto here Deepika.

[Deepika]

Well, I write such pieces for the sake of self motivation. Must say, I'm a fan of Cohelo's works. Not sure if my writings actually fit into poetry(perhaps more of philosophy :P) but I'm pleased you considered it capable enough to enlighten someone.
Thanks for your views ANTO :)

[Saddam]

Its my hobby to highlight some special part but here what I drag here, That's all are very valuable. You are too good on those write dear. Nice going for everyone. great read.

[Deepika]

Thanks! means a lot :)

[Saddam]

They are acceptable, You are most welcome dear.