Who's more powerful?

 

A cat's meow increases a mouse's heart beat,

A Rat's razor sharp teeth finds the paper notes indifferent,

The Currency notes decides a Sapien's fate,

A Human's voice has got the power to keep the cat out of gate

 

 

A dense forest can be brought down by a wild fire,

The fierce blazes can be calmed down by good shower,

A deep freeze can stop the water's dynamics,

The thick wood can stop the heavy breezes

 

 

We all dwell on the same land and breath in the same air,

Based on our physical triad we get grouped under varied nomenclature,

Either we gotta be somewhat strongest or pretty much wisest

Coz Life's ruled by the theory ‘Survival of the fittest’

 

Reviews

[Rounak Jain]

Good one. Last para was so good. Triads nomenclature survival of te fittest. Biology chemistry. Makes me imagine those scjool days. Nostalgia apart, a message conveyed nicely.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Outstanding....a beautiful written piece worth enjoying and you are bang on...

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Anurag :)

[backwords]

I had to read it 2wice to get your point. That is such a good point haha, nice one. I never thought of it that way. What a creative way to make a point. It's so gently and intellectually laid upon the reader, that the reader dare not ruin it with argument. That is how u know it is truly art!

[Deepika]

Haha..thank you for your patience and efforts in trying to understand it:) Thanks for stopping by!

[Roshan Nair]

Awesome piece! very creative in creating linkages in nature in stanza 2 !

[Deepika]

Thank you so much :)