Coz Life is how you Define..

Life doesn't wanna take your blame

Keep your chin high and face all the shame

 

Don't get unnerved when you've a great fall

Coz culprit is your expectations that are standing tall

Don't weaken your efficacy in those luckless moment

Coz that's a reagent that keeps you up and buoyant

 

Don't get stupefied when there are hurdles and pain

Lessons from those bitter moments is what you gotta gain

Coz someone's gotta loose when someone's gonna win

And happiness can be seeked from nowhere but within

 

Forget the past as the present is more precious

Thank the god for being so gracious

Like an Architect design your future

Coz ur reaction to a situation is what really matter

 

Though they say money makes a mare go

It ain't a moderator for all the calamities the life throw

Buck up and make your life shine

Coz Life is exactly how you define

Reviews

[Roshan Nair]

Loved the AABB rhyme scheme, its a classic but usually forsaken for exploring a more free style of poetry. But here it completely embodies your sentiment to inspire. Great job deepika :)

[Deepika]

Thanks Roshan! :)To be honest, not much aware of the acceptable standards in poetry.Just my way of letting out my views. Thanks for the info :)

[Roshan Nair]

Lol I dunno much myself, just gathering from the stuff read here :)

[Kuldeep desai]

its nice and brilliant...............i liked it.....

[Deepika]

Glad u liked it! :)

[Ana B.]

A brilliant piece, absolutely gorgeous and beautiful ideas. All in truth.
Lovely write!

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Ana :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

a very very good read it is.... every line is superb.... how can you people write so well.... this site contains many brilliant writers....

[Deepika]

That's a great compliment. Thanks Anurag :)

[Prashant Pandey]

first of all excellent title. 'Coz culprit is your expectations that are standing tall' this is the truth of life. But one can not live without expectations in life. How to handle all this problems and live a gud life is depicted by your words in very nice way.

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot for your kind words :)

[Prashant Rajput]

awesome rythmic sequence...the way in which you inspired and motivated people to become concious about present and future is fantastic.

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot for your motivating words :)

[Saddam]

Forget the past as the present is more precious
Thank the god for being so gracious.

Rhythmic line are more beautiful than free lines, and upon that a massage, that make it more beautiful. We must valued our present.
I believe in Gita; Karmdev vadhikarse ma falesu kada chanaaa.
I believe your poem.

[Deepika]

Thanks! that means a lot to me :)