Death

Death

A Poem by Deepika

That very feeling of never getting to see ever again,

Those sweet memories that keep surfacing every now and then,

Words remain untold when we realize how the life has just unfold

Time seizes before we could pay any tribute

Though its true that no one's immortal

Those feelings ' ve got the power to make heart grow most feeble

Though with time we grow strong and wise

Yet leaves us with a loss than we can never compromise

Bond breaks with the body that's deprived of breath

Struggle ends with the climax known as 'Death'

 

© 2015 Deepika


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a suprb dive in the imagination of death. tremendous job. how deep you went at time of writing is showing your ultimate talent.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Deepika

10 Years Ago

Just a matter of feelings that are tied to the experience ;) thanks a lot :)
Time seizes before we could pay any tribute
Though its true that no one's immortal.

Philosophical thought and really to the point. And this end

Bond breaks with the body that's deprived of breath
Struggle ends with the climax known as 'Death'


Posted 10 Years Ago


Deepika

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
Dark and thoughtful. Wish I could do something as good as that. Keep at it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Deepika

10 Years Ago

Means a lot! Thanks Andrew :)

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Added on January 17, 2015
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Deepika
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bangalore, karnataka, India



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