Fate

No matter how hard you strive towards your future

Astrologer entrusts your success to your star

When life upsets you and makes you suffer

You let your fate to solve the bizzare

Though life's got moments that are sweet and bitter

No one knows what's awaiting in the future that's afar

Hence when destiny is impractical to alter

Positive fate is what we can just desire

Reviews

[Chris]

An understanding of the language AND its form - rare.

You expressed yourself with poise and effect.

[Deepika]

Pleased to hear that. Thanks chris :)

[Kuldeep desai]

No one can change the fate...... Not even any astrologer.... We have to take the life as it comes.... Very well written....

[Deepika]

thank you Kuldeep!

[Happy hours]

so much you shown in few lines....very beautifully penned

[Deepika]

Thanks Anshul :)

[Saddam]

This is so true dear friend. very practical poetry. Love it.

Astrologer entrusts your success to your star
When life upsets you and makes you suffer
and
Positive fate is what we can desire

[Deepika]

Thank you! :)