Day and Night

When sun looses his shine 

And hides himself behind the ocean 

Moon with chivalry of constellation 

Marches and rules above the horizon 

While sun keeps spreading wide with his rays 

Moon keeps dissolving until there's no trace 

Though there are countless stars to even say 

They fail to light minor percent of what a single star does in the day 

Like hide and seek they appear alternate 

We keep rolling over the calendar to keep track of the date

Reviews

[anant mody]

everythinggg.is awesomeeee
butt it should end with nic line may
be first line shld.also be d last linee that was my small suggesstion

[Deepika]

thanks for the suggestion :)

[anant mody]

wwllooowww
amazing use of wordssss yaarr
:-):-):-):-)
10/10

[Deepika]

Thank a lot :)

[anant mody]

:-):-)
keep poetinggg

[Ana B.]

very philosophical write and it reminds me of the eternal duality.....enjoyed reading it. :)

[Deepika]

Thanks much Ana :)

[anupam sharma]

enjoyed the words you used.... very neat

[Deepika]

Means a lot.thanks :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Well Observed n Thoughtful Write up. I liked how u took this subject for ur write up. i mean we see i everyday still hav'nt thought of penning it down. Great job Maam

[Deepika]

Thanks nitesh for the review:)