'Substantial' echo

Things around us provide us an illusion that they have something to tell..

Ragged toys lie pleading on the floor not to throw 

Mountains high stand defying us to climb above 

Cactus warn us not touch her

Tides take pride in dragging us towards the center 

Pastures thank us for handful sup 

Pastries lure us being decked up 

Plain white paper prompts me to write 

I'm awaken from slumber with sun rays so bright.

Reviews

[anant mody]

wowwwww
never heard
but thanks.to u now.i can hear these echoo:-):-)

[Deepika]

haha.. ty:)

[anant mody]

:-):-):-):-):-)

i.would.lik to hear ur more echoesss

[anupam sharma]

nice way of viewing things

[Deepika]

Thank you:)