Moving on

Moving on

A Poem by Deepika

I spent my days and night
Traversing back in time when things were all right
Analysing the flashes for long 
Penalizing myself for no wrong
Not realising my time was at stake
Yet presuming you too would want those moments back

No no not anymore
Don't look back at me and that's what I implore
Because I've accepted that you are long gone
And I'm determined to move on!

© 2014 Deepika


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goodd.oneee
reminded mee.of my moving.on

keep up good.work:-):-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Deepika

10 Years Ago

thank you:)
Jumping From 1st To 2nd para... felt as if it was unfelt love in 1st and anger in 2nd. Well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Deepika

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the reviews :)
filled with emotions. beautifully written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Deepika

10 Years Ago

Thank you:)

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Added on November 15, 2014
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Deepika
Deepika

bangalore, karnataka, India



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