Feelings

Feelings

A Poem by Deepika

You ain't got no bound,

You just enter the cortex and make your round,

With no clues or any kinda sound

Alas! You've not gotta tell anything profound!

 

Though you are good at keeping me spell bound,

Yet you are not worth a single pound!

You triumph at keeping me drowned,

But I plead you to, stop taking me as your play ground!

 

© 2015 Deepika


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Nicely written Deepika the flow is very good. Yes it makes no sound while entering our mind but sure we will be spell bound to it. I wrote feelings are toys of heart but you are asking it not to take you as play ground beautiful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Deepika

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Prabha :)
Prabha Salimath

10 Years Ago

You are welcome
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Added on November 4, 2014
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Deepika
Deepika

bangalore, karnataka, India



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