Lost

I wrote this poem because it is exactly what I feel.

What do you call it when all you feel is pain?
When your loved ones look at you and all you feel is shame?
When your tired of living and playing this game?
when you know your life is meaningless and your the only one to blame?

What do you call it when the hurt is in your soul?
When you smile and laugh but you know its all a show?
When you feel like you've hit your all time low?
When nothing makes you happy and the darkness around you grows?

What do you call it when you feel so alone?
When your in your house but it don't feel like home?
When you look back in your life and every choice you made now seems wrong?
When the wait to die seems too long.

Reviews

[maria vesic]

Kenya,very nice poem,don` feel that you are alone Ok? we all go through things in life that hurts,try and say to yourself ,I am somebody, and I have a lot to give others,even if you dont` feel like it at the moment,things will change,from maria.

[Kenya]

Thanks . Its Not To Much I feel Alone all the time Its Just Who Do I Have In My Life thaat I can Talk to . You Know?

[maria vesic]

i know Kenya, but believe me this will all pass,keep up the good work Ok?

[maria vesic]

hope you feel better today Kenya?, go out in the world and do your thing,being nice to people, which they will notice, is all you need to do,it looks like you already have that gift. I noticed it takes a little time for good things to happen,and that is where patience comes in,OK?

[Kenya]

Thanks ! maria

[maria vesic]

You are very welcome Kenya.