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Its Just A Poem I Came up With when I was Feeling alone & Trapped

Shes So Unhappy 

I Wonder Why?

He Told Her He Loved Her 

Oh My! 

Now Shes Been Crying Practically Her whole Life

Her Skies Are Gray 

And Her Heart Is Gloomy 

Oh Why?

Shes Never Felt That Way Before 

Now Everything That Enters She Hopes Wont Go

All Because He Told Her He Loved Her

Oh Why?

Author's Note

He Told Her I Love You When He Didn't mean it Basically and She Got Broken In the End

Reviews

[Perri]

Random capitalisation is irritating.
Girl meets boy>girl loves boy>boy doesn't love girl>the end is a slight cliche. I suppose the world won't suffer for one more heartbreak poem. Poetry is a good way to express feelings and you seem to have achieved that.
It's decent.

[Kenya]

Thankyou

[Tracey C.]

This is very nice! Everybody has gone through that at least once; so MOST should be able to relate to this =)

[Kenya]

Thanks

[Tracey C.]

Welcome!