Reminiscence

Reminiscence

A Poem by Beatus
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My new friend is awesome! She and I have known each other for two days! She decided to text me a verse and I responded with a different verse. ENJOY!!

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I closed my eyes and found myself in the depths of your fondest memories.

I will loose many selves in here, even if you receive them as charaties.

Guided by the lights of your life, they keep me alive.

The pleasant feeling turns our distance to drive.

Every breath brings us closer, soon the shadows of the moonlight hour will meet.

The sun will be in slumber, thus beings of the night will creep but your lights won't let me flee

© 2018 Beatus


Author's Note

Beatus
Ignore grammar problems. I tried to edit the poem without jeopardizing the rhythm or rhyme scheme. Again MY FRIEND IS AWESOME!!

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Added on August 12, 2018
Last Updated on August 12, 2018
Tags: memories, loosing yourself, romance, companionship, love

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Beatus
Beatus

Fresno, CA



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