If I Said I Love You (Gemini Love)

If I Said I Love You (Gemini Love)

A Poem by BenightedWhispers
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This is dedicated to a close friend of mine. Their birthday is today, and so I decided to write them a poem. Uea, my friend, is the closest person I have to look up to as a sister

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If I said I love you

Can I keep you forever?

Would you never let me go?

Would you be my closest friend?

 

If I said I love you

More than life itself,

Will you hold me close

And never let me go?

 

If I said I love you

If I said I love you

If I said I love you

Would you never let me go?

 

If I said I love you

Will your world turn sunny?

If I said I love you

Will the others turn muggy?

 

If I said I love you

"Forever and always

Never to end

Even if I pass;"

Would you tell me

That you feel the same way?

 

If I said I love you

If I said I love you

If I said I love you

Would you never let me go?

© 2017 BenightedWhispers


Author's Note

BenightedWhispers
I can and shall take whatever you have to throw at me. *Gets in defensive position* Haha! XD

"If I said I love you
(hehe) well I guess that answers that."




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What a cute poem! I loved it! I really enjoyed reading it! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like your poem. My boyfriend is Gemini and I haven't told him the I love him yet. I was hoping you would let me give this poem to him.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

BenightedWhispers

11 Years Ago

Of course. ^^
I like this poem a very wonderful poem it is...sometimes we wonder what would happen if we say i love you to someone.
Great Job

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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BenightedWhispers
BenightedWhispers

Breaking language barriers one foreign comic at a time (Manga, Manwha, Mahua...), KY



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