Suffocate in my Sanctuary

This one is entertaining...

Let me drown in the Lake of Loneliness.

Let me starve in the Desert of Despair.

Let me suffocate…

Let me suffocate…

Oh let me Suffocate in my sanctuary.

 

 

Let me Drown.

Let me Starve.

Let me suffocate.

Let me sing.

As I serenade my suffering.

 

 

Let me die in my destiny.

Let me wail in the Creek of Cries.

Let me seek condolence of the weeping trees.

Let me in the belly of the Kracken.

 

 

Let me suffocate…

Let me suffocate…

Oh let me Suffocate in my sanctuary.

 

 

Let me Drown.

Let me Starve.

Let me suffocate.

Let me sing.

As I serenade my suffering.

 

 

Let me be in the Meadow of Misery.

Let me be in the Tower of Torture.

Let me be…

Let me be…

Oh please leave me in my destiny.

 

 

Let me suffocate…

Let me suffocate…

Oh let me Suffocate in my sanctuary.

 

 

Let me Drown.

Let me Starve.

Let me suffocate.

Let me sing.

As I serenade my suffering.

 

 

Let me plead on the pillar philanthropy.

Let me fall off the cliff of compassion.

Let me fall to the ruthless rocks below.

 

 

Let me suffocate…

Let me suffocate…

Oh let me Suffocate in my sanctuary.

 

 

Let me Drown.

Let me Starve.

Let me suffocate.

Let me sing.

As I serenade my suffering.

 

 

As my lifeless corpse is thrown into the Terrible Tundra

I realize the helplessness of my struggle.

No matter how hard they try,

A soul cannot be broken if

there wasn’t one to start with.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Wow, you created such an intriguing world of the most depressing emotions. Clever... yet emotionally draining.... Uhh, I like the repititions.. mainly because repetitions are the best way to keep the reader from forgetting about what your point is throughout the poem. It's only irritating when it's like those HEAD ON commercials, but this is poetry: Where repititions prevail. :D

Thanks for sharing this. It was an amazing. Gotta love the suicidal themes. ;)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Staci Brown]

loved the ending! the repetition works but i honestly feel it as a song (lyrics). could hear music in my head for it :D

definitely depressing tho

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)