The Deadly Touch of Red Water

I wrote this when I was 12...I'm 16. This is the 3rd try posting this. This poem is morbidly depressing. and a little scary for people under 13. That's why it is rated T for Teen. XD

What am I supposed to do?
I'm not gonna wait around for you.
I'm gonna cry when you go?
So choose cause I'm not gonna wait for you.
I'm not gonna wait my life away.

I'm not gonna cry if you go away.
So stop trying.
stop the madness and let me be.
I know you need me but
I don't need you so

Let me be free.
Let me be me.
Empty words are all I hear.
Let me be and set me free.
I'm not gonna wait for you.

I  won't cry when you go.
What am I supposed to do?
Theres a black hole that sucked away
All the happiness YOU took away.
How typical of my life with you.

Now I can't enjoy life knowing
That you are lurking in the shadows
Waiting to devour the rest of me.
Devote. Devour.
You are devoted to devour the rest of me.

What am I supposed to do?
Wait around for you to...
These new sensations running through me.
See red water and you afraid.
Speaking words I never knew to you.

Tasting something that tastes like
Red water.
Hearing booms and bangs.
Seeing the fallen struggling to stand
Who will never see the light of day again.

Feeling the red water
With me soaked to the very bone.
How is it that I feel these sensations?
Touching the silk red water.
Feeling like I will explode.

Seeing my life rush before my eyes.
feeling the icy cold steel going through me.
What are these sensations?
Hearing the intolerable buzzing in my head.
Feeling the rough tough of the red water.

Seeing the sorrow on the faces of many.
What is this red waters purpose?
To divide the living and the dead?
To make sorrow and war?
To destroy and grow stronger?

What is red water exactly?
Is it alive inside us
Waiting to be unleashed?
What does it want with me?
This red water covering my eyes.

I can see it's purpose.
I can feel it's warm deadly touch.
It's incredible blood lust.
It's desire to kill.
It's destiny to destroy.

I can still feel it's warm touch on my skin.
I can still feel it's warm breath
breathing upon me.
Covering me
I can see the horror it has unleashed.

Silver shining in the moonlight
Preparing to die where they stand
The Red water is evil.
Why the knowledge given so late?
Damn the Red Water to Hell.

The Red Water is evil.
An imp to only be slowed down.
Never should it be released.
Oh but when it is unleashed
it is in all it's fury!

I can still feel it's silky body on my rough attire.
I can taste the salty victory.
I can hear the clanging.
the clanging of silver to silver
shining in the moonlight.

 I still can't move.
The red water will not allow so.
I feel sick as if poisioned by it.
To where I couuld only obey it.
I am the Red Water's Slave.

It poisioned me to where
I could no longer taste but
it's slimy texture inside me.
I could no longer hear but
the clanging of shiney silver to silver

I could no longer feel but
It's silky warm texture.
I could no longer see but
it's red liquidy self.
This is insane!

I can no longer think but
what it wanted me to think, and
we all know what it thinks.
I could no longer breathe without
it's warm breath in me.

The red water is incredible!
The water is invinsible!
'Tis unstoppable!
You will all soon come to the power.
To the power of the Red Water!

The power of the Red Water
with the water pouring down our faces.
As I thought this it came to me.
Why refuse much needed help?
I struck with the Red Water's fury!

Then I struck again.
Then I struck some more.
Then I struck a fourth time!
The Red Water is mine to control!
I won but at what cost?

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Give me any advice, tips or just anything you come up with please and thank you.

Reviews

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Ohhhhhh my gooooooooodddd..This was awesome..It is very good..I really like this one.....I am nit picky with writing...so no worries.....Great job..keep up the great work....=)